Music (or noise :p )

Somehow this is two years old. I muck about for my own pleasure.
https://soundcloud.com/jef_uk/first-track-finished
The low end is a little lacking, I should rerecord with a little more base for my taste.
I wrote and recorded the first track I've done for over 15 years or there about.
I'm using an old KS rack synth.
It's a little ruff, I've played this on a keyboard building it up in layers, there is some clipping on the track but its become part of it for me, would like to know if you can here it.
After the final brake down there is a bit of a change where I press through to the after-touch using the after-touch adds some distortions to some of the keys.

I've not touched a synth since this track about six months ago.
https://soundcloud.com/jef_uk/third-3

I've been working on a three month contact for the last 18 months and hope to one day have some spare time to muck around.

My son has some tracks on Soundcloud:

Callum

Prefer the original version of kingdom its quite good.
Levels are nice, vocal has a nice amount of chorus. Is the static by design?
Each part base, lead, drums & vocal are at really nice levels.
Its actually quite good. Its sounds vintage and progressive at the same time.

I'm adding about 1.5db to the bass for a slight warmer sound. That's far less than I add to my own track.

chorus is perhaps not the right word.
Its not reverb or echo but as if there is sustain on the voice. Was it run through a Vocoder with the slightest of of effects?

It made me think of running cords through my external synth with a slight chorus effect.