Hello guys, you lot have been very helpfull in the past. When you have your morning coffee would you mind just having a quick look over the new Roar Power site for me, I have gone a bit snow blind and I dont want it live for long without getting it checked by a fresh set of eyes.

Knock yourself out..bound to be spelling and gram errors, dead links, basically try and break it and let me know on this thread!?

Cheers guys.

Roar Power : Longlife exhausts Birmingham

Steve

On the home page links on the left:

Alloy Wheels not alloy wheels.

Exhaust Systems not Exhaust Sys.

The writing for the bottom two exhaust tip links are not bold like the rest.

At the top of the exhaust links "We can offer:" Is not bold and should be larger than the rest of the text, since it's a title.

You sell Jab Style exhaust tips not Jap (I'm guessing).

The dump valve & Inductions kit buttons appear linked together unlike the rest.

If you hover over the dump valve link it changes to say exhaust sys.

Main body of text on the home page:

can't not cant.

upgrades not upgrages.

Your phone number at the bottom of the page is listed as : 0121 0121 6433320



On the alloy wheels page:

Alternatively is spelt wrong.

Most cars will use what is known as a positive offset


From the stainless exhaust page:

Warranty not Warrenty


From the Induction Kit Page

There are many designs of K&N induction kist


From the Dump Valve Page:

Daihatsu is spelt wrong


From the Car Sales Page:

Coming is spelt wrong


From the TOTB Page:

We have proved it

Benefits is spelt wrong


From the Special Offers Page

There is nothing in there for Gunzi for proof reading the website


There cuold be more I've missed but that's what I found while having a nice cup of tea.

Thankyou very much! I think I have resolved all of them! Great help

Ta

Steve

he he

just noticed, on the TOTB page the word "prove" is spelt with 2 x o.....

did.. thanks

When you click on any link and look at the phone number its states 0121 0121 twice.

Damn fingers





Great when can I come up to get my free exhaust?

On the home page you have two full stops: "me.. 0121"

Your banner:

Longlife Exhausts, Alloy Wheels and Styling in Birmingham?

I can be more picky:

On the exhaust system page you have a return after the second paragraph, but don't after any other paragraphs. On that same page the text is too close to the second picture. The same in the TOTB section next to Nigels car.

The links on the left aren't separated evenly, they are between Alloys / Exhausts / Induction Kits, but not between Inductions Kits / Dump Valves, Home / Alloy Wheels, TOTB / RP forum, RP Forum / Special offers.

TOTB - In addition

There are more, like commas missing etc, but nothing life threatening.

Still says Jab Style.

But needs friends

Add me!!!!

(facebook: Longlife Stainless Exhausts Birmingham)

The links to Roar Power from the Motor-Mech page don't work.